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Supervisor rejected my dissertation thesis statement for being vague?

phd-doctoral ▲ 1 5 views 2026-10-11

I am a PhD candidate in clinical nursing and my supervisor sent back my proposal draft, saying the central argument is too broad to be testable within my sample size. I have been staring at the same three sentences for two days and cannot figure out how to make it specific without losing the theoretical framework I built. I need a strategy to tighten the scope before my next meeting.

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